Mood killer
The art style is great, but why bother when the humor lacks substance? Even if you wanted to end it abruptly, you could have taken more time to find a decent laugh.
Reviews for "Halo: Argus Omega"
disapointing...
At first, im thinking, jesus christ, this artist is really seting up the mood, hes making it look like hes creating a halo movie, im thinking oh god, this will be one of the very few halo animations that are good.... and... when the white spartan farts, and says that other line..... it TOTALLY breaks the mood.... i mean really it wasnt even funny, a fart joke? and the follow up line didnt even make sense... reallly dude, you had potential in that clip, but you wasted it in a horrible, mood killing joke, that didnt even bring up a laugh.
I REFUSE to believe this is his first movie
His says this his first movie. I don't believe him - it's waaaaay too good.
For a first attempt- good!
Took a loooooooooooong time to open,and I have DSL, so you might want to figure out a way to cut down file size. (Or maybe my internet was acting up)
The movie itself was very good, liked the twist at the end.
VERY well animated, you cut no corners. Gave each scene it's own time, didn't rush it, and didn't prolong it. Frame rate was excellent, very smooth transitions.
Although the Paper Mario style fo turning head and body is unique, it doesn't look real good. And on background things, use smaller lines. (The debris in the shooting scene looked like big blobs instead of rocks or chunks of concrete) This will bring your main character more into focus.
And try to work on a preloader of some sort for a long loading movie.
Give yourself a pat on the back, though. Great Job!
so-so
the artwork was nice.. i loved it but if you were trying to be funny.... then you failed miserably. but keep up the good sketches