umm...
took forever to load, that lost some points. but i like how you elaborated and took into the DBZ plot. the draings of the characters were pretty good, a little rough but i liked the style. very nice. 7 out of 10
Reviews for "Xeon's Revenge Part: 1"
Okay
I voted to protect it but i thought i would throw this out to you. It has a bunch of glitches that need to be fixed. I would suggest to A. withdraw it B. Fix Glitches and C. make a better ending i hate the cliche being dropped off with no idea whats going on. And please make a sequal
Top marks on effort!
The graphics weren't exactly amazing but there seemed to be a ton of effort put into this... in order to improve the graphics this could only be done through practice. The best part is it's a DBZ Flash and it's NOT a sprite movie HORAY! However don't let the standard drop on further instalements otherwise this will neaver last...
Not too bad
I know you were having difficulty thinking of a plot, and it was reflected in the film. It was a little jumpy and jittery, sometimes with the music as well.
However, I liked the choice of music. The characters werent THAT badly drawn (someone before posted about their muscles looking like breasts or something.) I don't think it should be blammed overall, since it was actually well-done and connected. The only fault lying in the confusion that may follow for those who don't know anything about DBZ.
Majin-Ryan responds:
yeah the music was put on bad and the thing about bardock and frieza but i'll fix those problems. thnx
save this
this has it's glitches and genraly needs a bit of work but it definitely needs to be kept
Majin-Ryan responds:
thnx dude, i will try not to have any glitches in the sencond prt