Not a very good way to start
This kinda sucked I understand this is your first submission but you need to make something that has more cahones.
Reviews for "The Story of Glenn"
i voted 0, here's the reasons;
Intro was too long.
Sprites sucks ( you can't draw for shit, don't you? ).
Sprites sucks.
Sprites sucks.
Eh.
Honestly, there are a couple of things to work with. First of all, the screen with your sprites is WAY too small. You have all that space for the window to type in your text. Take advantage of that same space. I hate to squint my eyes just trying to see what's going on.
The movement for the sprites is very choppy. You could use work in making it flow a little. Try to add some more frames in there.
Grammar. Lots of errors. Fix them.
The only thing I truly liked was the music. I have the soundtrack myself.
And is this simply a recap of Glenn's story? It's not very interesting to watch, since all you're doing is re-telling the story. Had you created an original story based on Glenn's story, it would have been a little different.
But keep working on it. I'll check out your next 2 parts for the series and see if anything improves.
This is actually kinda nice
I think this is a very nice movie. It needed some originality and was short :(.
not bad
not my type of movie, but okay i guess. didn't blam it cuz it coincides with all the other movies of this type so... looks like you will make it. and its not about the sprites. i like them. sprites & vodka kicks ass. lol