Very nice.
It's very good and I liked it alot, it is very expressive.
Very nice.
It's very good and I liked it alot, it is very expressive.
Cool... Needs a little work on timing
I really like this animation, a lot of style shown here. I do, however, think that both the sound, timing and overused fades detract from the experience quite a bit. Try switching some of the fades to plain ol' cuts, and making the music vary/last longer (at least until the gunshot). Otherwise, good work! I hope it survives.
Yes I had little time working on the music but i will make it better, for sure, thx for the tips
good
This is a decent flash movie. It has a moral which is good. The only problem is that i was lost till the end about what was going on. Maybe put a line of text in the beggining or something. Other than that a solid performance indeed.
Sure to work on that, thx a lot for the tips, I'm here to read them and learn, thx indeed
I guess I'm not that smart...
I had to watch this one twice in order to understand the meaning. I didn't get the fact that he was standing there looking into the sun after the gun went off. Then I saw the picture frame, and got the meaning. Very well put together and I like the message. Good Work!
Khrissy
7/10
Don't worry, the movie is indeed a little confusing, I'll try to get it better put so there's no more problems
Not Bad
The movie was nice, and very stylish, but is just kind of forgettable. More imagery and more character devepment would have been enough to bump this from a 7 to a 9.