a simple understanding
great work, the scrolling was well planned out, but i wasn't getting any sound, thats why i gave it a five there, but even with out, the clip is most definately worth watching a few times over, hope to see more from ya, maybe a series?????????
Yeah, a series would be cool , maybe I'll do it, thx for the good review :)
Cool... Needs a little work on timing
I really like this animation, a lot of style shown here. I do, however, think that both the sound, timing and overused fades detract from the experience quite a bit. Try switching some of the fades to plain ol' cuts, and making the music vary/last longer (at least until the gunshot). Otherwise, good work! I hope it survives.
Yes I had little time working on the music but i will make it better, for sure, thx for the tips
Nice
I enjoyed your graphics and the music, though the graphics can be better. I'm guessing this story is based off past experience and it was very well done. Make more flash =P
not far haha, I sure will work more and better next time, thx
agreed
let go is good
Yes indeed, you got that right , thx for the review
has potential
The sound was decent as was the animation but it could stand to be cleaned up just a little. where it needs work is in the "plot" as it were. It seemed like it was trying to get an emotional freebie. The context suggested that it was supposed to be sad and perhaps generate sympathy, but there just wasn't enough there in the character to really reach me. Don't give up though it looked like it had definate potential, I would like see more.
thx for the tips, sure to do it better next time ;)