Well..
The graphics were pretty good, but they took too long to make the kiss! Next time, speed it up just a bit. Oh, and one little thing that might help is a story line/plot. I dunno, it may have a plot dealing with another submission of yours, but I don't want to go through all that just to know what's going on. Besides that, I doubt many people like Yaoi. If they do, fine, but it should be tasteful! Making a flash out of just a kiss is a waste of loading time. Blah.
-SynP