Reviews for A wonderful world

[73h-m4k0]

My two cents, don't just ignore me

Look, you obviously have some talent for making cinematic art and what not, but it does need some fine tuning. You get the message across very well, but I don't really think that the song was your best choice. Or animation. Maybe you should consider doing it over with real pictures instead of drawings, since people feel much more emotion when they see actual people. I think it was okay, and you have what it takes, but you need to develop it more. The guy getting kicked was a little too random. That and stills don't evoke as much emotion as moving animation. Just some stuff to think about...
Nice try though, honestly.

[New-Neo]

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[LJCoffee]

SO close....

With a little more work, this could be great - the juxtaposition of the music and the vignettes was good - if you had more scenes of violence and less black and with either slightly more or slightly less of a story this could be really good. to go with more of a story this should be like a worst day in some guys life - show from the perspective of the victim. - to go with less of a story - consider scenese from the worst section of town during the worst riot of our times kind of thing - might be a good starting point. Either way - I'm only giving advice - not trying to direct your creation - keep it up - your doing fine.

[Cyberdevil]

ok.

Well,the music sure was good,lol,but the animation could have had more time spent on it,keep up the good work though!Good idea!=PBtw,add a preloader next time too.

-cd-

[Rakechan]

hmm...

Seemed to have a good enough idea behind it, just that there's a bit too much black-ness between the images. Maybe add in a little movement, and have the images up on the screen for a little longer...