Its ok.
Pretty good for your first submission!Add some stars or stuff for the black background to look like space though,but this was great!Im looking forward to the next part,keep up the good work!
-cd-
Reviews for "Star Wars Spoof"
Nickoteen responds:
Well, let's hope there'll be a next part then :)
Sucks
The series that you do are so stupid there only 20 seconds man that's worse then my first flash !!!
Nickoteen responds:
The movie part is exactly 60.0 seconds, actually.
to short
you have tallent on flash but with crap like this ure not using it. that dosnt qualify as a spoof either.
Nice graphics
It looks well drawn and may be decent. This cut off way too early though. That doesn't even really qualify as a teaser.
Nickoteen responds:
Yes, it cut of WAY too early, because the assignment is due the day after tomorrow, and I have no time at all to work on it tomorrow....
There's potential
There's potential here, just need to make it a little longer. I think all the heads should have really small bodies. Keep it up though!
Nickoteen responds:
I was going to add bodies, but the deadline prohibited it.