good job
it's very good indeed. i don't know if you've read my review on "Memory" but i say all the rest there. keep it up! :)
Reviews for "Memory: Deleted Scene"
Xenosteel responds:
thank you! I'll go and check out your review right away :)
Nice story...
You know, you have a good storytelling voice! It wasn't told like somebody couldn't see what the leter says, and it's now by a little kid who thinks he ownes the place. Keep up the good work and let the stories be told by you! :)
wow!
I really enjoyed this. The deleted scene added more to the story. It made me feel really bad for the person who wrote in the book. You definitely need to do more like this!
Awe
Allright - the first part, memory, was good. But it was confusing - and succeeded more at scaring me than touching me and reaching out to me. However, the fact that it did scare the crap out of me - once - and then kept me tense throughout the entire movie, made me go tense throughout this movie - I absorbed it a lot better than I think I would have otherwise.
The movie - this movie, is brilliant. Of course, one needs to have seen the other one as well as this to understand the contents, but.. well, I liked this one better. By a long shot. I... the part where he got to the friend, well, it moved me. It brought a tear to my eye. I cannot say this about any other flash movie, song, story, book, and at least the majority of the films I've seen. It really did. Touching, moving, affecting, whatever the word you want to use, it was brilliant.
One thing that... really wasn't as bad as you make it sound like is your voice acting. Really. It's great - the emphasis you put on certain words, the length, the speed with which you talk, all of it make the flash film a WHOLE lot better than it would have if you just had added some text to the film.
All in all - great work. The world needs more people like you.
Now I understand!!
That really ties everything together....wow, if this was a real movie, it'd become one of my favorites!! Love your work!!