i honestly hated that
i don't know why but i am a fan of sprite flash but i hated that. i think it's becuase you dd such a crummy job with some thing that involves barley any drawing...
Reviews for "ChronoTriggerLegendsEp5"
a bit tiring and confusing.
Liked: sprites and bgs and music... well chosen I guess.
Looked like you worked fairly hard on it.
disliked: seemed to slow. No 'story so far' bit for 1st-time viewers. Didn't like the circles with the gradients. if you're going to use a gradient for an explosion, make the outside bit 0% alpha, not black.
It did sorta tire me, mainly as I didn't know what had gone before and it didn't seem specially rivetting. Fight scenes don't need to be animated as limited as the game's were.
Looks like you put a lot of work into this, but I just didn't enjoy it.
nope...
from a technical standpoint this was sloppy and poorly comprised. The sprite sheets for the background even skipped in the begining! As a matter of fact, the music looped poorly, the action was horrible. You even used the most primitive of gradients for the lasers!
The text was boring and didn't flow well... erm... bad grammar too.
I was very disapointed as to what was going on, why things happened, and the whole presentation of the matter. Bad backgrounds, unimaginative story, and overall bad flow of things.
Very unasuring and i'm not quite sure how this got daily 1st when others are much better. It's a shame, but it's how i feel: Disapointed. Ugh, it moved may too slow and was 2 MIN LONG? agh! you barely put anything in this.
I'm sorry, this earns a 1/5 from me, this showed no effort at all.
SquareHard responds:
sorry it came out choppy, im still new to flash, it runs jus fine before i export it, then it jus goes to hell >.<, thx for the review tho, i will try to put something better for u on the next one, and also, u have to watch the previous 4 episodes, or ull get confused where the storylines going, thats why u probably didnt like it
Not good enough
This DAily place? What has gone worng. This was way way to short and had not enough action. Atleast put in a bit of humor. The sprites were to small. You had 1 camera angle. The sound was too repetative, You had to click too much, You got the personalities all wrong, You have got a decent score, Your effects were bad, the file size was extremely big, (learn to optimise sound). Thats just to name a few thing that should be improved.And how long did this take you to make? a couple days at most? Try harder
Do one of those lemons...
I really think you should either improve your sprite work or just write the story down and send it to an Chrono Trigger fanclub or something. Ayla was choppy and the fight wasn't good. At least make the bits move or shoot around instead of one place at the same time. Story line is good though... it's just that your flash work is crap right now. (I'm too tired to think of a nicer way to say it)