first movie?...
Er i guess it was allright, maybe the end comes too suddently, i was expecting something like a fight or more ? The graphic need to be checked.
The music may be ok, but you use it like a random that's funny but it's like an old cartoon(i don't remember witch one but i remember well that sound when he get catched)...But anyway you mixt the musics too much ^^'....
Er to finish , this is not smooth, it goes wrong many times,(not smooth) but if you amelior some things it will be great...good luck.