Ill review this as i watch it
First thing, skip button in case people hate opening credits
Secondly, if you can, use diagonal moving sprites instea dof using that jagged sudden turn thing.
Another thing, i changed the fridge note to "Your fathers secretly gay", dunno why but i did, guess i was bored ^^
Use semi transparent text boxes for text, perhaps chuck in a picture of the character thats talking. make text boxes the size of the text, no bigger.
Thats all for me,. Other than what i said it was good, cant wait for another!