YOUR 1ST ONE WAS BETTER
NOTE MY REVIEW IS ALL IN CAPITALS BECAUSE I NEEDED CAPITALS TO GET THAT PSWRD TO WORK WICH I CHEATED AND USED TAB 4 BECAUSE U SAID IT DIDNT WRK SO I TRIED IT AND IT DID. Now then, i thought the story was way to open ended it made no real sence and compared to your 1st one wich i also reviewed. for the length of the movie and the hassle with that stupid passwrd thing, the story didnt move to far. the sword wasnt even shown, basically all that improved is your action scripting techniques which i thnk u were so happy about u forgot to actually make an episode. there was so much text not enough animation and the interaction, was also pointless. wether u attack or use magic u will hit the same on the machine thing. and the passwrd is only going to lose you veiwers cus they cant be bothered. remember its on ng as a movie so people expect to sit back and relax not think. put it as a game otherwise. i still see great potential with this idea but dnt lose track with your story telling technique as your mastering new techniques. like in the film and television industry. just because u can use star wipes doesnt mean you do!