Reviews for FF:NewDestinyThePrelude

[SJ-Zero]

Nothing WRONG with it.

I didn't find anything particularly wrong with it per se(it's better than I could do, and a really nice start to a series), but you might want to think about using fewer cliches, low information content phrases, and blatant "grab you by the head and pry your eyes open" foreshadowing (think: cyans "He'd give anything...ANYTHING.") in your writing. Something I've learned is that even in actual RPG writing, where people are more forgiving than in "instant gratification" stuff like this, not every person wants to read twenty lines of script where three would do, and sometimes the shorter one can have a greater impact and give more information.

I hope my advice invokes thought. :)

SquareHard responds:

heh, i dont know, when i play RPG, i loved reading everything, so the more i can read to me, the better it was for me, but this was really only setting up for the actual series, so i had to really make sure ppl knew what i was talking about, thx for the review man

[Crazy-Lizard-Inc]

hmm

well man, dont know what to say, first of all i havent seen any of your other work, but the thing i can say for certain is that you could work on your graphics if youre interested in improving the series.

personally i cant wait until i see something related to ff VII onwards as that is when i got into the series...any chance you could work on that?

[winKoneR]

I dunno...

It's just a prelude I know...I hope so that the 1st epizode will be good...
Terra, save the world once again...that was really stupid....
And Shadow living with that little kiddo and that old gramps ?
HA HA HA ... that make me sick ... it's like I imagine sephiroth playing with chocobos and drinking tea with kids ... uf..

[orb]

Sorry,

Sorry, But I didn't like it. One: I got too bored, it was WAY too slow moving. Two: Fucking sprite animations. You didn't make that yourself, you just downloaded sprites from other people. That's gay. Do some non sprite work please, sprites are for losers.

SquareHard responds:

w/e floats ur boat, but sprites are wat i like to play around with, if u can draw thats great for u, but i cant draw and animate at the same time seeing how im brand new to flash, and sprites are the easier to work, and yea, its a bit boring, but its a prelude, its setting up the whole series, thx for the review tho

[89-Vincent-89]

Doesn't She Die

Ummm...... doesn't Terra.... DIE!!! i havn't played the game in some time, but i am think she dies. also this is just crap and has FFVI has been played to death. JUST LET IT DIE!!! IT WASNT THAT GOOD OF A GAME!!!