I gave it a 6, and I'm being nice..
it was good. the only thing that I dident like was the mouths.. try to work on that.. otherwise.. it was good.
Reviews for "Halloweened pt2"
Good but not too good.
Nice story but the intro was a bit long and the zombie things been done to death a million + times specially since its halloween. Humor was ok. Wouldve been better if more work was put in the animation of the main characters.
hrmph
Well, to start, watch the "really long intros" flash... seriously a lot of that didn't need to be there, and made me lose interest. The thing I didn't like was that a lot of the sprites just repeated themselves... and the character's just moved their mouthes and eyes very rarely... At times there was no sound, like monsters stomping around... don't get lazy! Some things were a little dragged out, but I liked some parts none the less. 3/5
cholerae responds:
First of all: YOU watch the "really long intros" movie. It rants against intros that do nothing but aggrandize the author (I only mentioned my (nick)name once in the intro/movie), add pointless hype and that are just text based. I tried to use my intro to set the mood, get a few gags in (the dead actors/film-people) and pay homage to Tim Burton's long intros.
You say that at times there was no sound, well if you can direct me to an instantly accessable database of cool and appropriate sound effects to use, feel welcome because my sound resource is rather limited.
it was ok
sounds were late their mouths were moving when they werent talking or just sighed so basically sounds couldve been alittle better and matched up more n stuff but other than that and alittle of the motion was sorta off then it was pretty good
cholerae responds:
Yeah, I know about the weird sound synching error... it's weird because when I previewed it in flash itself the sound synched perfectly... very bizarre.
And about the lip synching, well I made the movie in three weeks (and only during weekends), and I'm not really in a position to outsource my boring animation tasks to India or something, so you'll have to suffer through that.
Thanks for the review.
Not bad at all
Not bad, could use some work, and alot of the sounds are off...But over all its a pretty good and long flash, maybe even front page material.
keep up the good work.