I Can't See (Turn on the lights!)
Well, the drawings were excellent, and the story was decent, but it was too dark to actually see anything. Also, the story starts off exciting and promising, but ends unexpecedly fast, mediocre ending.
Other than that, good work.
Yay!... I... think....
Well, The cottage should be getting
some flood lights for the football
pitch they have out the back, and the
gardener should be comming on
tuesday to cut back all that nasty
folliage that's blocking out the light...
Oh! And the cleaner should be
comming round soon to scrub all
that blood of the walls... so it should
be a lot brighter then.
Until then, you will have to deal with
the suspense and eerieness that the
movie implies by concealing
everything but the path and the lone
shadow.
Thanks for the review, and happy halloween!
Errrm, no
Sorry, but the whole freaking thing was too dark for me to tell what was really going on.
Oh, and there's only one "g" in begining.
Oh- thank you Dr. Spell check... i'm
sure that's been bugging you
throughout the whole movie...
Can anyone tell me WHY I made it so
dark?
Anyone?
Look at the other replies before
reviewing me, please.
Could Be Better
Not to bad of a job but the whole flash was way to dark I mean theres a difference between a dark theme and just the setting of the flash just being way to dark. I did like the kind of theme to the flash the dark idea was cool but like I said alittle to dark. There was acouple of parts that just dragged on for to long and it bugged me. The character design could be cleaned up. I did like the violin music game the flash a very dramatic theme nice work in the sound department.
OVerall: Could Be Better 7
Thnks if I do say so myself what game did you mean it wasn't a game not to sound bitter but it would be nice if you used punctuation in your reviews because its a little hard to understand what you are trying to say. I know it's a bit darkm but that's the point- it's so you get that disoriented feeling- so you kinda don't know what's going on.
The whole Idea was so that you could only see this tiny, tiny bit of path... and to focus your attention on the shadow. But, overall, it WAS only made in three hours.
Not Bad, eh?
And the music in the background is Vanessa maes sabre dance, slowed down my about half the tempo and given a reverb.
Thank you for your comments,sicko sticko.
What?
I'm sorry, nice drawings, but first of all:
preview your submission on a decent monitor. The whole thing is way too dark and I had to turn my monitor's brightness way up to even see it. Don't worry, it's a mistake we all make though.
Second,
it starts off very promising, but then it ends very abrubtly. It made me ask myself, what is the point of this movie?
All style but no content.
I'm sure you appreciate why it took so long to me to respond. There is nothing to retaliate to... mainly becasue you have been so nice about negative comments. At least the movie made you ask something of yourself... that is an aspect that all film makers attempt to get... but you probably meant that in a negative sense so.... oh well.
The moniter I do have is perfectly fine, thank you... all though my vision isn't all that good...hehe... Maybe I need some new eyes.
Well, got to go, I've heard they do organs on ebay...
toothy grin
OH MY GAWD! loved the loading bar!!!!!!!!
Er... thanks... you so crayzih!