Now THATS how you tell a story
Excellent job, man. I had to read that book last year as well, and didn't like it as much as some other people, but you did a great job putting the best parts into a stylish flash movie. Im 99.6% sure you're gettin an A for that one.
The music in the bg shoulda been of higher quality to make it a 9, and the timing was a few milliseconds off on a lot of things. Still, great job.
Wicked!! Glad you liked it! I actually did amazing on my project. Thanks for the advice, I had to lower the quality to make it fit on a floppy disk. =) thanks for watching.
Slighty lacking
LOVE the idea, juxtaposing anime and classic literature...but if kind of lost steam towards the end. Maybe could you add another scene? It seemed like you jumped a few chapters.
Also, could you soften the volume just a touch?
Let us know what grade you get!
Thanks for waching, I did it in a wekk, so I'm sorry to dissapoint. My later work will be alot better. Thanks for watching!!
very good
I loved it really...I loved reading the great gatsby and this was a pretty good representation of the theme focusing on his having everything but the woman he loved. Of course, ppl who didnt read the book may not get a few things but it was prety clear...and to answer the previous review, he did give a bribe to the police but it is never seen but in the note to avoid a ticket or something as little as that i believe
haha
shitty book, but a great flash!
=) Awesome.
Good
That was good, I really liked the music track. Didn't really get the plot but okay, doesn't matter. Keep it up!
haha, thanks, glad you liked it, if you read the book, I think you'd be ok.