Nice First Flash
Its was a well done flash, even for a first. Try animating the guys more, and maybe work on their faces a little. I thought his huge mouth looked funny so thats the 1 in humor. Loved the music, i might have to go play MGS right now. Work on it some more and i cant wait to see your next flash, and more to come if any. Keep it up, you'll do fine
very good for your first
Very good, but not perfect, try the nex time to move the characters, like in primal war. very good stpry by the way
nice...
It's a good first flash, I'll say that much. It's no work of art, but it does a decent job.
First off, the animations. You had minor things down (like the lightbulb exploding in the beginning), but animating the people was very poor. You do a good job drawing them; they achieve a muscular look. At times, though, it almost felt like they were static objects moving around. I wasn't particularly impressed with the VIP, either. For a first time, it's understandable, but do work on it for future flicks.
The story itself is very solid. I bought into the main CT's story quickly, but again, the animation made it rough. The scene where he closes his wife's eyes... it would have been so much better if it were animated properly.
The sounds I had no problem with. I just wish they were varied; after playing Counter Strike long enough, they get very boring. Good job using their radio commands for some of the voicing, though.
You do a good job with the fight scenes, especially with that ninja character. My only complaint are the two fight scenes where the Terrorists and the CT's are on the same screen at once. It feels out of place in the movie.
A very impressive first flash, regardless. Keep it up!
Mediocre
That was okay excpte no animation you just moved people around the screen and no voices that knocked a couple points down, It was okay though not crap but not good. Just imbtween.
OK... Lets get somethin straight
I noticed that the song was from Metal Gear Solid. Great way of using it. The graphics were good at the beginning. But later on they got sloppy. You gotta werk on that. And my favorite part was the end. Cuz, it was sad :'(. And you made a pretty big glitch. Everyone kept on running into each other and they kept on shooting and nobody really died. If there were smart, they would just throw a grenade. But overall, I enjoyed the movie. Great job.
ha i was a noob that time. i'm gettin better at flash and i know how to animate better etc. i also tend to get lazy at the end of my projects hehe. well thanks for your review, and glad you appreciate it. =p