nicely done
_comment to guy below me_ its not really porn its more ecchi cuz if it was porn they would be naked but i dont see any nudity so ide say ecchi ok but now for my comment ide say judgeing from my books its almost at the top of the ladder and continue youre work also i love how you drew the waterfall in the backround it looks awesome
Agree w/ DeadlySkill & givin professional review.
First Omnigon is a hypocrite to his own words, so it is best to ignore his idiocy. I agree that DeadlySkill should respond to this unfair review, but do so outside of the actual review area. I will let it go this time, but if I see this from either of you again there will be consequences. Am I being clear?
Okay... This piece is very sultry. The texture, coloring, and shading are very well developed. The background even looks as if it is made from brush strokes, which adds a surreal feeling about the jungle spring. The figures proportions are slightly off, there hourglass's (butt to waist to bust) are way to elongated. I think overall it is a very nice work. Keep up the good work.
hmm...
I'm not a professional when it comes to rating pictures neither am i that good at art... but it is apparent that the background really has a lot of effort in it and that the girls look somehow.. added or something. If that really is true then could you tell me why you added them? Because if it was for the reason i think it is; that you want to draw attention to your pictures with those then don't. Your pictures are good enough and if you DO want to draw girls in a picture try spending equally much time on the girls as on the background! :) I hope this was helpful and that you can reflect on it. Overall good work:)
Real good.
The girl sitting on the rocks has her feet in the water right? but in the end it looks like just 1 foot, and it also looks like her (right from her side) thigh has been partly cut off, and the girl to the left, her waist just seems either too slim, or she has turned her spine in a really fucked way, AND the girl in the middle, her left arm seems sloppy done, like the arm is a colored stick, with a hand on the end.
Yeah. lol there are so many unsightly anatomy problems in this one. I drew it when I was like 17, so this was kind of a fanservice to my boyfriend at the time. The background however was what I really spent my time on. ^^;
The girls look good, but their placement in this doesn't feel right. It feels very forced. On the flip side, the scenery is great, and very believable.