Schmuck .
Um... Jesus was JEWISH (I dunno what your Bible says, but that's a fact.) And, he was supposed to be a generally nice and compassionate guy unless you pissed him off, so why would (according to your intro statement) he go off and beat the ever-loving snot out of Jews? And why did he swear like he was from Fishtown in Philly?
Religious offenses aside, I'll give you a critique. While your style is rough as compared with other cartoons, I have very little room to speak as I've only made one cartoon ever. The style wasn't unpleasant to look at, but it was very rough and didn't run very smoothly. There are long gaps of silence and/or stillness that could have been edited out, as they make the cartoon seem far longer than it should have been.
Another question goes to the voice-overs. I assumed you were intentionally making it impossible to understand what God was saying, but that whole segment made no sense. You hear him mumbling, Jesus swearing, and him going somewhere. We didn't get to see where he was going or what he was doing, or even why.