Needs some work
Alright heres some constructive critisicms
-The second MasterChiefs voice needs to be fixed that burned my hears when he talked dont ever do a voice over like that again!
-More jokes, the grenade thing was a little funny but after that it got kind of slow.
-More jokes
-Needs to be longer
Good luck on future flashes
A dissapointment to all halo fans
I'll try to say this as nice as possible, it sucked
its just stolen jokes and bad graphics
I already read halobabies and it was painfull to watch since the jokes were so blatantly stolen.
Its just generally TERRIBLE
WOW... Is that it
Dude it was ok, but there was no point, and it was too short. Some humor, but not as much as needed. If your not going to make it action, you must make it a good comedy, so you keep your viewers interested.
Uhh... OK...
Awright, that one was OK, but the others, make 'em like the others! The fans don't like change...