Contradicting Messages
First, the animation itself was very good.
However in your comments you made were against people commiting suicide, however that seems to be the statement you make in your work with this piece. I am wondering, however if maybe the text in your animation could have been changed a bit-are you saying you feel that people who commit suicide are courageous because of that? Or are you trying to send a message to people not to be angry with loved ones who have done it? I suppose I am confused by this.
Suicide only hurts others. And is generally an act done by those who feel they have no other means of escape-which in the end is not very couragous. And when all is said and done, you have only left those who loved you with a more difficult existence than they knew before, which from what I see in this, you suggest that they should kill themselves as well to be considered couragous?
I suppose what I am getting at is, while the animation was good in this, the message you sent (which pretty blatently contradicts what you state in your comments) really needs maybe some altering (mainly in the text) or if that really is what you mean, your comments perhaps need changed to better parallel what your work says for you?