The milkman
Haha nice this was a funny adaptation(sp) of the Raven the milkman was the funneyest par and the graphics and sound were good.However sometime's during the movie the sutitle's would go behind the words jumbleing them up.
overal:Good animation and a funny twist on the Raven
I think it was great
I think that it was great. dialogue was sorta off at some times and there could have been more sound effects but I think the writing was great.
Not bad... but could be improved greatly.
I am not gonna harp on the fact that this type of movie is becoming WAY to common on newgrounds. Hehe, this one even had the characters being built in the the beginning; how original. =/
Aside from that, I think that you should spend a bit more effort good voice acting, and possibly better mouth animations. These 2 things are extremely important! I would also recommend finding an ACTUAL GIRL to do Sydney's voice. I mean... seriously...
Also, I noticed that this animation was pretty much completely devoid of any sound effects except for dialogue. I mean, we can't event get the everlasting harp sound for a flash back... or something?
As I stated before, I think the real issue with this film is not necessarily the animation/art style. It is mainly in coming up with some convincing voices and effects to compliment the good writing. Good luck!
meh
wow.. u really shat all over that poem, didnt u. Nice try though
meh
i don't know why this got awesome on it, the subtitles were way behind each other and it lead to akward moments while it caught up with itself. the milkman was like jabba finx or what ever from satr wars ep. 1 he just wouldnt shut up! otherwise you did a fair job.