First shot
Yeah, this movie definitely sucked. But I do see some potential.
Keep practicing.
Reviews for "Kataris"
Really funny
I think this was really good for a noobie. But just a reminder to the so called pros out there, don't be harsh to the noobies after all you were once one too. Well anyway keep up the good work White Jackel You'll be really good someday.
me too
no break. I appreciate that it's your first flash, work on faster movements and... well... more of them. Also, the fish voice is a bit too fast I think, it's hard to hear.
its your first flash
i will not give you a break
Sorry, but not quite there.
The artwork's good, you've definitely got talent there; the concept for it is cool, too. However, there's hardly any animation, per se: there are a couple big pauses where I found myself thinking, "Is that it?" You could definitely stand to work in some more animation or take out some of the sound (or a little of both). Plus, there were some pretty annoying spelling errors (break, jackal, etc.). Lastly, if you're going to make a sound higher, you (or whoever does it) needs to speak slowly so viewers can understand them... that is, I could only pick out a few words the fish said "nmn nmnm mnmm FEEED MEEE mnm nm!"