Yet another of my thorough reviews...
The beginning was okay in my opinion. I felt it built up to something, but the thing it built up to really didn't match the beginning.
The synth in this song, in my opinion, was just a little too weird-sounding. It sounded dry. I could pick out all the little clicks in the saw (that's what it was, right?)
It was wayyy too repetitive, and I didn't really like what was repeating.
from :20 to :38, I thought it was building up to something crazy. I was kinda disappointed when the rest of the song followed the same sequence as that part. I did like how the filter cutoff slowly dropped on that snare drum during that section though. However, the random sound effect sections aren't really good in my opinion.
This song really does sound whipped up for funsies. I don't mean any offense, I'm trying to be helpful.