short
Considering your style it was good. I thought it would have been a little longer myself. Not a whole lot going on. But it's cool!
short
Considering your style it was good. I thought it would have been a little longer myself. Not a whole lot going on. But it's cool!
More of a plot
That was a nice short... could use a plot... and maybe bubbles instead of the captioning below
only 1 reason i wrote this review
and thats to laugh at pfffft, what a dumb cunt, trying to b smart saying the computer is the box. h8 to tell u but a computer doesnt even have to b a pc. a computer is basically anything that is designed to do a task and that is programmable. and if u are talking about a pc, then u are still wrong. but the dude who reviewed b4 already settled that one.
to the author of this, it was pretty good, bit small bit short, but nice style.
oh yer "pffffffft" before u post something again research it first, cuz u seriously are stupid!
good
previous guy was a dumbass. The "whole thing" is collectively the computer. The box is just a baseunit.
Pffffffffff
For you information, the computer is the box. And the "computer" in your version is the screen. No im not a nerd and i will noet save ya ass. But maybe you are making goody stuff for nerds. (Now nerds, don't hate me now!). Anyway was a bit short and need some more work.
-JF-