meh
it was ok... but i assume this is the first time ever you have done it so... try again and get better.
also ask some people for tips, not me though i dont know what the hell im talking about when it comes to flash, but someone who does who can give you tips.
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The concept is funny enough, when you get sick and tired of annoying trick-or-treaters just looking for a hand out, what do you want to do? Use a shot gun! The graphics need a lot of work, the kid is cute enough, but the motions and such are pretty poor. The voices could be improved a lot, the warped sounding voice was what you probably intended.
Ryan
wow.
Good graphics, sucky everything else.
alright
It's great that you're teaching yourself flash and making movies with it. Don't give up ... your stuff with get progressivly better.
This wasn't horrible but it was far from entertaining. Try to think up a storyline or at least plan out a couple of scenes before making a movie you plan to show others. One 10 second scene isn't going to entertain anybody and thats the goal isnt it ?
GL with your next one
Thanks a lot. I've already started a series called "The One". I showed it to a friend, who hates EVERYTHING I make, but he thought this was "kick-ass". It has an awsome story-line, and will have TONs of action, so maybe that will be a lot better. But thanks a lot, again, for the tips.
Thou needest to improve...
Okay, the idea seems solid, trick or treat children annoy the hell out of you and you get revenge. Im fine with that. But with a shotgun? Surely there would be a more inventive way of doing the dirty deed...like giving them a bomb shaped like a toffee apple, or give them some LSD that looks like candy or give them fruit...heh now thats evil.
Also, the graphics also need some improving as they aren't very good...I will presume that this is a first try, so for a first attempt not bad, but prehaps some characters would be good, or better still a plot...You remember those things?
Well, anyway, Thou must improve!!!