Nice work
Nice work in the intro caught my attention.
Now first off I have no idea what so ever for you reason of putting those random notes starting at 0:10 because they do absolutely nothing for your song.
Second I think you did awesome on the drums! except I don't really like the panning because well it fits for some songs but I think you would need to have it pan more jagged ( like instead of slowly going back and fourth just switch )
third I think it kinda get repetitive after awhile. Maybe work on some more variation to the melody!
Fourth I here some clipping which means you need to work some on your mastering. like for example that effect at :57 maybe its suppose to be like that but it sounds unnatural.
And 5th (last) Maybe work on the ending some kinda just stops.
Anyways overall pretty good job!
8/10
5/5
Have A great Day!
XenoxX :)