Pointless violence and gore. A waste of 2 weeks.
I can understand that you were trying to send some vague message about people ruining their life in trying to get a better one or something to that nature. I can't really tell, because you didn't elaborate on any meaning at all. Just a bunch of stick figure violence. Why do you think people are going to like this? Sure, it's a tad funny, and the graphics are somewhat okay for stick figures, but pointless bloody stick figure carnage gets submitted in droves to the portal every day. For a first flash it was good, and you show a lot of potential, but now that you've somewhat developed your skills, you can use them to make a movie with good quality. Do something unique and interesting, like humor, actual story, games, whatever. But mindless action is rarely sucessful, with few exceptions. And stick figures even less, as stick figures just don't look good. From what you've already done, you've shown you're not just a run of the mill person who can only create a few choppy films in flash. Put your skills to good, productive use, instead of the same boring action and blood which we can see in thousands of movies.