Could be Better
I liked that it was more of a serious flash but I think that you still have alot of things to learn. First of all you did it all in motion tween which works but frame by frame would have been so awesome.
Graphics: The characters could look better and if you added some hair to that one guy that moved that would look great. Some of the movements looked strange.
Sound: You need to change the music and make it more intense the one you used just didn't work for me.
OVerall: Could Be Better 7