I know!
I think I know what the face is lacking...but first nice artwork. I like the coffee stains lol and well anyways I think you did a little too much spacing on the eyes...which might be the problem
Reviews for "Mech Chick"
LegolaSS responds:
thanks for the feedback... i wont go over this old picture and retouch it however :(
Nice
It's great but it seems that her right arm is shorter than the left... If you would make it stick out more in fronter of her body it would probably be improved! Other than that awesome work and great details!
LegolaSS responds:
thanks for the useful feedback... i wont go back seen as i no longer have the file of her... oh well :P
Love it!
The only thing I like of anime girls with guns is elfves (but not elves with guns >:P) ANyways, I was going to critique on why you didn't edit out the lines, but I see you did that inentionally, I honetsly love the effect! Along with the slightly wrinkled effect. Its not easy to get blue to show up like that, is it shopped? The only thing that confuses my is why there is pencil shavings next to a fountain pen...
LegolaSS responds:
well you see... the background was given to me to work on for the collab... i then did a "pencil" sketch of it... then coloured it in with watered down ink... of course i managed to make a mess and get a coffee stain on it while i was working on my other picture :P... it was all done in flash mx... beacuse im poor an cant get a proper art program :(
almsot perfekt^^
i love this but the look on her face lack something not sure what^^
LegolaSS responds:
i was told to make a woman atrative... there must be one tiny thing wrong with her... so im told :3... but i cant really improve something if even you dont know what it is...
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
boobs!!!!
(am I the only one who thinks this way mostly?)
LegolaSS responds:
your a newgrounds user... if you dont think like that... you have come to the wrong place...