I guess I'll write...
First, the composition was alright, could use more variations, throughout the song, instead of copy and pasting. It's not a dance song, it's a song for acoustic sets, so write like it.
I did not like the samples, at all, too much high EQ on the violin, and way too loud. Neither voices had any true emotion, no dynamic increases, or sounded whole and warm for the thought of the piece. (I mean, someone died right in this one right?)
It can be improved, just find that balance and warmth, take your time.