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Reviews for "Lisa's Song =HFX="

I guess I'll write...

First, the composition was alright, could use more variations, throughout the song, instead of copy and pasting. It's not a dance song, it's a song for acoustic sets, so write like it.

I did not like the samples, at all, too much high EQ on the violin, and way too loud. Neither voices had any true emotion, no dynamic increases, or sounded whole and warm for the thought of the piece. (I mean, someone died right in this one right?)

It can be improved, just find that balance and warmth, take your time.

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you very much for the review. I don't mind bad reviews as long as they're helpful.

Let's see....
I agree with you on the violin sample. It wasn't the best, but it's the best I have so far without having to pay. :(

The dynamics do change... but within the time span of 3 minutes, I wasn't able to do much for such a slow piece. I'll probably expand on it more later.

Thank you very much for listening and reviewing. ^_^ I'll let you know if there's a redone version.

-HFX ^_^