I REALLY like your style.
This is really well drawn, very similar to Salad Fingers, which isnt bad. I was a bit creeped out by it, but thats why i loved it. Gave this a 4, would have gone 5 if the dude would have gone to different places.
The Teddy bear and the body bag= creep factor. Keep it up and make it into a series, this is a REALLY good start.