"wat was tht...i think ive gone deaf"........
ok firstly the sound on tht was awful u cudnt hear any of the voices....there was no story line .......it was just boring and trying to hard to be freaky.........good character an all....with a bit.....well alot more work this cud me really good...
Some constructive criticism,
By this point even my mother knows about Salad Fingers, which makes this concept seem all the more redundant. It seemed under animated, with only one background and very little movement from the character(s). You have a talent for creating decent looking characters, but, where David Firth is able to tap into a subconscious feeling of unease, this flash gave me a bad 'nu metal' after taste. You would be better suited to working on original concepts.
Okay...
I know you said it was a SF tribute/heavily influenced, but... I didn't like it. I couldn't understand a word that freakin' thing said, for one. For two, I think you could have gotten a little more original with the music. You used the same artist as Firth-- Boards of Canada. I mean, I love their songs, but it just seemed to somehow add to the rip-off factor. Also... it was just weird. Weirder than Salad Fingers weird, as well as boring. Not captivating in any way, shape, or form.
... Yeah. Just letting you know what I think.
This is bad
Can't understand a word being said...maybe u need a better mic.
Even so, the voice-acting is terrible..& its not creepy at all.
sound
i can't hear anything.