It was alright...
I liked it, exept that I thought the opening scene was a bit long. (Maybe make Cybertron rotate?) And the overall animation was pretty good, but the graphics were...meh. The actual Transformers were drawn good but when the arm gets blown off and the missiles and stuff - that was kinda unconvincing... 6/10=3/5.
Hmm, not bad...
Graphics are okay. Storyline is usual except for the ending with Unicron. Oh well, keep trying.
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Great concepts, graphics need to be a bit better.still gettin a good mark though
not bad
graphics were a bit bad, try drawing them out a few times to improve on this, also required sounds such as explosions and missile fire just music didn't really work, but gd idea and animation seemed pretty gd 5/5
I know i could improve on it, im just a lazy ass. Anyway, thanks.
I saw this last time.
It's better this time. I do have constructive critcism though. The green block that blinks before the writing appears needs to be tweaked. It's not on the same level as the text. The text itself gets some odd spacing in one portion that throws off the box completely. This is a little thing, but you should have colons after "year", "location", and "reason" or "objective" or whatever that last line is. The animation can be tightened as can the actual drawings.
Keep practicing and reviewing your own work before submitting and you'll do fine. Right now it's sketchy on whether it will pass or not. I think you should try to do better before submitting (because I think you can) so if it does get blammed don't get upset. Just keep working on it.
Thankyou, I like critism as long as its helpful, I will work on those parts you said. The text thing wasnt my fault, i had a different font, but It wouldnt change when i tested it, so i lost intrest in it. But, none the less, Thankyou for your suggestions