Well, this is Damain.
As you can see when you read this. My rank is in no way compaired to yours! LEVEL 11 with Elete guard private was easy to obtain. Think if I actually took it seriously! But In all of a sence, your flash sucked. It was the worst I've ever seen so far. With a FBF with arms and a Tween from a ball? I don't know flash at all and I could make this. LMAO.
-Damain
Hold the phone... not only do you have two accounts but you switched between them to get your point across more via your e-penis? WTF? DO NOT WANT! Seriously Was their any purpose to this apart from keeping your piconjo lover learning Flash rep seperate from your reviewing rep?
When I want the opinion of someone who intends to make a name for themself with meh piconjo movies I'll ask for it...
This got passed in?
I think you understand my whole responce to the review. Time to sign onto my real account.
-Damain
very nice! (again)
but you need to make the arms longer to get the movment right!
but it was a nice one! hope to see more!
The arms need to be longer? lol I thought that was the least of the problems with this ^^;
Nonetheless thanks for the kind review =)
could have been better
the arm movements, a little choppy for my blood, and all the other movements blow, my advise as a fellow beginner flash author, take ur time, 4 days seems like u rushed it,
I was kind of against the clock when I made this and only just learnt the basic principles of animation. You're right though I learnt shortly after I made this you can't rush art... no matter how much you may want to @_@
i think you relied on humor.
sadly, i did not find this funny, probably because of the large amount of swearing i do whenever the fuck i feel like it. see? it was good, most people would say it just sucked, but im nicer [no, im not really. i just look deeper. normally i can say i aint found shit, but this flash isnt one of those times]. your illustrations were good, but it needed to be more fluid. like, a higher fps or something. and although i have not submitted any flash to newgrounds, i have made some, and have some in the works. i say this because i have little of two things: patience and free time. i dunno what it says my age is in my profile but it is probably wrong [ive tried to change it; wont work]. regardless, because of my impatience and spare time, making flash can be a hassle. i also like to think its good, and whether NG and its users likes it or not, i couldnt give a shit. id say the first thing everybody really wants is just to make it through the initiall trial of protection or blammination. now, i say all this because i understand that it can be hard to make a flash run smoothly. but you say, if you bug shin enough, hell make a flash. now this is just how i think [and apologize if this is offensive]:
bug shin more, and hell make a better flash. dunno. just a thought. it seems im went on enough. good day then. [and once in the past i had a little issue with how i only signed up in january. i had a little problem with my previous user account.]
What the? LOL that is one long review right there...but thanks regardless for taking the time to
I had a different attitude to Flash back when I made this, but I know now anyone can make a Flash Movie but not anyone can do it well. The quality comes down to having the time and dedication to learn, a good story and/or jokes and sometimes even what your mental state was when you made the movie!
I have another project in progress funnily enough the likes of which newgrounds has never seen before, but I need to throw in some extra gimmicks like outakes since that always goes down a treat XD Check out my Deviantart if you're curious as to what I have planned...