Quite good but the sound is terrible
This may look like its been made by a gay guy out his face on magic mushrooms but its actually quite good and it has alot of style. you really need to brush up on your sound editing skill. using sound forge to do that is one of the best ways but anyway keep up the good work
yeah, people really seem to be hating that sound.I dont know what I can really do about it, but ill try harder next time
Nice Work. The story was short but sweet. I would say this is front page material.
Keep it up.
I dont think its popular enough t make it to the front page, but most prople seem to be liking it, so thats something
umm yeahhh....
what the heck was that all about? is it supposed to be some kind of role model thing going on? i didnt like this flash at all, get it off, make room for better animations, only decent thing about this was the graphics.
AOL SoundBoard?
The animation was wonderful, very colorful and smooth (Well, for the most part. It lagged for me a bit during the busier scenes). I like the style you have as well. A little more animation to make her wings look like they're flitting would make it perfect. But this would have gotten a four or five from me if it hadn't been for the sounds.
To be honest, the sounds are what killed it., especially when she eats the cherry. They were far too common sound bytes that just plain didn't fit with the feel of the movie.
Try searching deeper for more sounds or even try making them on your own and dust your audio; it sounds a little staticy (if that's even a word)
THanks for all the positive stuff you said. As for the sounds, I really dont know where else to find them, except flashkit.cim and searching for free sounds on google
So boring.
But well animated.