why
why did you kill foamy? why? why? why? what did he ever do to you. now you must face the squirrely wrath of his minions. i place my pity on your hopelessly lost soul and pray that your death is slow and excrutiatingly painful. but seriously now your flash was funny but needs some improvement on the sound i could barely understand the dude with the black hair
Well...
I think it has potential for being a bit more funny, and I like all the cameos, but if it's going to be your own original series, I think that wasn't too great of a start. Still, it was pretty alright.
Bleh.
It was decent. I didnt care much for it though.
umm
Well I hate to say it but...this looks an awful lot like Tomorrows Nobodies...I mean you even do basicaly the same thing in the opening credits they do and the whole topic seems to be quite similar. Also, when the guy walked in his legs didnt move..bouncing up and down is ok if you dont show their legs, but if you do, they should move...at least a little, how much more work could it be? And the second guy's head seems to misteriously change direction...You should show it moving or something and usualy when some ones talking they look at the person they're talking to. All things you could improve pretty easily...so do it next episode :)
I will improve on things for sure, the funny thing is that I wasn't thinking of TN at all! I haven't seen those toons in such a long time and whats funny to me is that my character "Dave" looks similar to "David" from TN. Maybe that name just goes well with rocker guys. lol
Meh
Was ok but the characters standing made no sense if they were meant to be having a conversation. The eyes were always staring directly in front and the idea and jokes are not all that original.
Make the characters actually acknowledge each other next episode instead of just facing forwards most the time looking at the screen.