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yea you abviously aint stupid you know how to make a gd flash movie but i also think your wasting your time on this series i think you could do better by thinking of a whole new something something that hasnt been seen befor or something i think you would do well
Constructive Critisism
Look, you obviously have a good amount of talent. You are WASTING your talent, period. Scrape this series and make a new one set in the DBZ universe with new characters. You're not getting anywhere with a bizzare alternative timeline, no voice acting, extremely unoriginal bad guys (buu with hair) and change of names. Oh that whole capital each word thing is pretty damn annoying too. Seriously, you won't get a good rating here and you're not doing yourself any good by the current path you have taken.
Dear Lord
I was high when I watched this flash...and it still sucked, that about sums it up ;D
But seriously, this series (Dragonball) was good 12 years ago. But to rip off a well-known series, add "new" characters and ideas, is STILL a rip off of a series that was good 12 years ago.
Your flash has re-introduced the concept of Dragonball and you have single handedly managed to make the Dragonball series suck even more "Balls" than it did in its prime. My suggestion to you, make your own god damn series with your own god damn ideas and let the dead rest in peace! Never resurface this mindless shit again unless you actually manage to ADD SOMETHING TO THE SERIES!!!
Honestly, I mean no offence man, you have some skills in drawing obviously, just it pains me to see them wasted on such crap. This is constructive criticism, don’t take it personally.
wow
what original characters...not
you just changed the names (partially) and kept the characters work harder on making something thats your own
not good
maybe better sound and better names.
pikori?its a stinky name you know!
so make a better one