Well...
Keeping in mind this is just a preview of what is to come (most likely), it wasn't that bad. I'm kinda wondering what the whole thing is gonna be about. Good for a preview/teaser thing. Can't wait to see when it's finished. It looks like it might be promising. As for the people saying "no words" (I'm gussing they mean talking) just ignore them. I've seen some pretty good ones here that have had no talking in it at all. This one, if done right, could be like that. Also, the graphics weren't half bad. I'm kinda into that style that you used for the flash. But yes, good for a preview!