That sucked.
I can think of a million ways that you could of improved on that. The Graphics were really grainy rubbish... The plot was really crap (although if more style and creativity had been put into it's presentation, it would have been great) and the effets made me wince. After a few more years of using flash, maybe you'll improve. And I know I can't do flash, I'm just saying that compared to other peices of work this doesn't stand out.