Nice :]
Wow man you're getting blammed pretty hard by alot of people for this one. Dont let it get you down. It is a nice piece of work. It aint amazing, but it does feel complete in itself. That is to say alto of flash clips struggle to maintain their style throughout a clip. I thought you managed this well.
I dont understand why people are so extreme with their views on things. Why does everthing have to be WOOOW or #@%$@ crap?
This piece was good. :]