Needs improvement, but not too bad for a first ep
It was kinda funny, but I was distracted by a lot of little flaws. The animation was okay, but the sync was off with the soundtrack all the way through. Work more on animating lips moving, too - not bad, but rough in places.
What was with the sound, anyhow? It was super quiet, muffled, and out of sync all the way through... Until the credits, when it was crisp and clean and plenty loud. Irritating.
Ummmm.
Too much Family Guy in that. Leave the funny stuff to Seth.
Yep......
This was ok, not great but that's jusy my opinion, the drawings are done well and the audio seems to be good. The storyline didnt really appeal to me though. Good work though.
names's the best part
it also got a couple laughs outta me. was hard to hear sometimes.
First flash?
Well thank god there are some people who actually make something worthwhile instead of submitting loads of crap. It is extremely good for a first flash, but still could improve. The only improvements can generally only be made by expensive equip and experience making cartoons. Keep it up.