not bad
the graphics were good, but the sound effects were crap. try getting some better sounds before submitting the next one. a good try though
Reviews for "Holy Sword"
SamurEYE responds:
yep, i know. thanks for the advice.
Has a few things going for it.
You have an interesting art style, and a fairly decent idea. I found the animation to be very rough, and some scenes failed to produce a cinematic effect because of it. Without that effect, this won't make a great series yet. If you find that your skills improve by the time you get to part ten of so, I'd advise a do over of the earlier works. I'm still experimenting with flash, so I don't have as good an understanding of it as you, but I've seen enough movies to compentently express what I thought was good or bad. Improve the animation for less choppines, especailly during the begining, as well as work on making a more dramatic fight scene, and you'll never have any problems later down the road.
SamurEYE responds:
its just going to be a part 1 and 2 sorta thing, but thanks for the advice.
ok
for a seconds flash its pretty cool and the idea was desent and graphis were diffent from anything i seen on newgrounds so good job
SamurEYE responds:
thank you
hey dude
hey dude can i have your aim or e-mail? because then you can teach me good flash because my work is crap.and where can you get swift 3d?
Cool
I like your animation style a lot. If you smoothed it out a little bit, and sped it up, I think you could produce some really great stuff without much change to the graphics themselves.
My one "continuity" complaint would be the holy sword itself...You've chosen a very eastern setting, but right smack in the middle of it is something that looks like The Master Sword from the Link / Zelda series. If your hero is a ninja, give him an appropriate magical weapon...maybe a blessed +3 katana named Snickersnee...just not a broadsword meant for a medieval western knight.