Not bad
The flash was alright I like the idea behind it, because it something that you dont usually see on Newgrounds which was a good choice because people are more willing to watch a new idea that might not be spectacular but well put together than something thats been done a million times thats spectacular.
Graphics: The graphics were pretty solid. You need to work on your motion tweening just alittle bit, all of the characters walked very fast and it looked like they were kinda sliding on the ground.
Sound: The sound was also pretty well done. You did a good job on the choice of music. The voice acting was very impresive and I enjoyed it. My only suggesion is make the voice acting louder than the music it kinda took away from the flash.
OVerall: Not Bad 8