A Work in Progress
So when I listen to remixes I hope they improve some form of the song. While you did some justice there is nothing stands out.
I'll start off with your synthes. You have an Arp in a cutoff filter doing the same thing for 2 minutes. It's really kind of bland and if you listen to the original song there is much more energy being brought forth in the build with the lyrics and drums. I know Trance is about big build ups but yours just didn't live up to it. Of course there is the remixes done by popular artists already for the OST so you have a large gap to cover to go above and beyond the original.
Your drums samples sound like Vengeance samples. The reverb kick you use I'm sure of that. Really there aren't many elements to this song. You use about 3 or 4 synthes it's seems but that's fine.
As good of a singer Lira is she didn't hit/live up to the originals vocals. The vocals at some points were to quiet and just struck little emotion. The vocals are close but they don't have the right amount of emotion.
Just because you have vocals doesn't mean you have to be simple with your song. Honestly nothing shines in this piece. The pianos nice but just mimics the original usually. The synthes doing it's arp thing which is stereotypical of trance and all around kind of annoying sometimes. If you removed the vocals from this song it wouldn't stand on its own as a great trance song.
I suggest rethinking some of the points in this song. (Sorry I'm taking music theory so I have to critique songs) You have a very bland transition and peak to the song. Try to make it more unique, quality isn't everything.
Sorry if I was a little harsh but you do have 2 songs on the top 5 so don't get cocky.
