Sounds Alot like...
It was inspired by Project One - Art of creation :P
Not a bad thing!
Anywayz, nice melo, and the kick just bring everything together, however, I think the tail of the kick should've been quieter with more distortion, Just for more power really.
After the melody and the kick, I think the break should've had more fx and stabs, but the lead upto the 2nd chorus is still pretty good xD
Very Nice, and congratz on Top 5!
5/5 8/10