Reviews for Deadman Wonderland Shiro

[KrisKrosNL]

Nice and epic.

This drawing looks epic, it looks really realistic and very...evil and dark, which I like. (That sort of feeling). I noticed a few "unfinished" areas and I'll point them out.

1. Shadows. (minus 1 point)

Yes, the dark shadows aren't as perfect as possible, but I'll have to admit that you did a great job on this. Maybe you could have shadow some more and make it look even better? It's your choice.

2. Left side of the pic. (Neutral)

I see a white zone on the left of this drawing, which is something I dislike. But since your scanner isn't perfect, I will not count this as a con.

3. No color. (Neutral)

I would really like it if it had color in it. This is, indeed, very hard, but maybe you could continue to work on it and make it look SUPER in color. It depends on your choice! Since it's really hard to add colors (or you don't want to) I'll not count this as a con, either.

So overall, 9/10 (aw, I can't vote) and I'm hoping for a colored version. :P Or a new drawing. :) Then it would be great!

~The Liberaten

MaartenC responds:

First, thank you very much for your review.

I know that the shadows haven't really worked out as good as I liked them to be, especially around the mask. That's indeed the scanner's fault.

I might make a colored version later on... That is, if I can bring myself to it. The girl has white-ish hair to begin with, but the eyes... and the gloves... mask... Damn that will be hard.

I did indeed leave that white, more on purpose than that the scanner failed. I CAN fix that, but I'll leave that for another drawing... I've got lots of more ideas!

Again, thanks for the review and I'll keep your review in mind for the next drawings.

EDIT: fixed pointer 2 for ya.