I give you props for quality animation
Ok, your animation was really quite good. But I have a few constructive criticisms:
1) Don't mention yourself so much before the movie
2) Shorten the intro, etc.
3) The audience needs to have a clue what's going on. Either do an extremely brief recap of previous episodes, or somehow briefly otherwise give background
4) Aside from the intro, I didn't mind the speed of the movie. Only adjustment I'd make is during the climax(ie, killing someone, etc), give more detail to what's going on. You started to, but then your animation of slicing through air with the weapon could have been much stronger.
Considering this is your 2nd animation ever, you're really onto something. Keep it up, ok?