good job
You did a very good job on the cartoon, the sound was great, the story was developed very well, and the graphics were grade A. The only thing that i thought was wrong with the cartoon is that it is in Spanish. Thats fine and everything but Newgrounds is made up of 99.9% english cartoons. Maybe you should make the next episode in English if you are going to submit it to Newgrounds.
DeathRayne
great!
It's a promising saga.Keep up the good work on Chapter 01 or you'll be blammed!
great introduction
that was excellent. it has set up the entire series very well.
although, as ubertoss2000 said, if you can translate the spanish, why not speak it? well, you may have your reasons. but i do think that having to continously read what is being said, can somewhat distract you from the visual a bit much. but, other than that, everything is great. and i look forward to watching the other chapters.
overall score: 7.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
6/10: okay
It was a little confusing because I found myself trying to keep up with the subtitles and video at the same time. It seemed a little fast paced for a deeply thought out story, but however the graphics were amazing, but nothing special because I've already seen it before. Hopefully in the next episode it won't have those annoying subtitles because they detract from the story rather then add to it. It was intriging and I would like to see more.
3/5 r
mj
impresseve
stay whith the plot